Sunset Steel

Sunset Steel

How is this poem? Please answer?

Scarlet wrists and bleeding lips blue eyes tell lies to seal my lips bloody scars My eyes painful to look at the gold stars in the passages of the night Your heart will be my candlelight, and true to life is your soul To break chains and We do everything in darker water and crystal tears fell asleep in the shadows mourn your life was chained to the stone and steel and take my hand and help you heal your hair stroked bold crimson onyx Your soul more beautiful than the most durable gold sunset sky as fragile as a butterfly from a beautiful heart grows stronger yet and the final move of his will to overcome the world losting castle built with stones and pearls, and that day we will come out as one in spirit to the north. Thanks! being as I am 12 not perfect, but I have tried

A star for effort, Bree, and may write more. You have a touch! His age is not important, but their work, the energy they bring to art, and his own willingness to strive to do better. Good luck, keep scribbling!